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Too weak to save my love by ~badmonkey911:iconbadmonkey911:



When we part I will not cry.
it is fate that one of use must die.
But if it was a choice I wish I could have gone instead of you.
I held your hand as you where swept away from me.
Then I cried.
I was too weak to save you.
Why must you suffer when I was the weak one who should have gone.
Because of my loss of losing you... I try not to love or to share with others my feelings so I don’t get close.
Because I fear that it will happen again to some one else.
I will always hate my self for being so weak and not being able to save you.
Next time I will save you.
So please wait for me... on the other side for just a little longer. So that I can finally save you and make up for my sins.
©2005-2009 ~badmonkey911
:iconbadmonkey911:

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:iconmona-chan:
When we part I will not cry.
it is fate that one of use must die.
But if it was a choice I wish I could have gone instead of you.
I held your hand as you where sweep away from me. ...as you were swept away from me
Then I cried.
I was too weak to save you.
Why must you suffer when I was the weak one who should have gone.
Because of my lost of losing you I try not to love or to share with other my feelings so I don’t get close. Because of my loss of losing you...with others my feelings...
Because I fear that it will happen again to some one else.
I will always hate my self for being so weak and not being able to save you.
Next time I will save you.
So please wit for me on the other side for just a little longer. So that I can finally save you and make up for my sins. So please wait for me...

Other stuff like "my self" and "some one" not having a space in between but hey.

You didn't have to, really :aww: Thanks!

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I believe in the yellow handkerchief of happiness!
:iconmona-chan:
Btw it's "Too weak to save the one I love", not "To".

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I believe in the yellow handkerchief of happiness!
:iconbadmonkey911:
all righty!
:D

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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..
:iconbadmonkey911:
it will not let me put the the other o for too so i change the title

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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..
:iconbattousaitim:
OMG, this is the first poem of yours I've read!! ^^ And it was good.
:iconshirozero:
Great job, once again! You have some poetry in your soul.
:iconbadmonkey911:
nooo stop it! :fightfive:
thanks again
:glomp:

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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..
:iconbadmonkey911:
lol i mean :highfive:
:faint:

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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..
:iconbadmonkey911:
waaaaaaaaaht!
thanks gald u like:D

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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..

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