Down in the dark I sit alone,
All that here is just me alone,
As my hands bleed with deep despair.
I call out for her even though she's not there.
The coldness of my heart drags me deep in my despair,
the more pain that comes the more I sink in this pool of despair.
This pool then turns red from my blood and I slowly sink into it.
Slowly...
Quitly...
And with my despair...














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All that here is me just alone, ---> "Just me alone" not me just alone
As my hands bleed with deep desoair. ---> "Despair" not desoair
I call out for her even though shes not there. ---> "She's" not "shes"
The coldness of my heart drags me deep in my despair,
the more pain that comes the more I sink in this pool of despair.
This pool then turns red from my blood and Islowlysink into it. "I slowly sink" not Islowlysink
Slowly...
Quitly... --->"Quietly" not quitly
And with my despair...
Yes, alone rhymes with alone and despair rhymes with despair. Yes.
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I believe in the yellow handkerchief of happiness!
XD
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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..
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I believe in the yellow handkerchief of happiness!
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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..
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This shindig looks like the bomb-diggitty! ~Lord Balmung of the Azure Sky, Descendant of Fianna
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I am not forgotten. Just lost in a time that wasn't there...
I am Just the A comatose Monkey lost in a time that will never be there..
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